Feedback for Idea 2
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| 8mm film |
- The camping in winter might be hard to set an actual fire going, maybe use a fake one? Which is vital for the section to look good
- consider using younger people
- The time lapse compliments whats going on in the narrative and how time has passed.
- To emphasise the time difference using 8mm and creating effects, people in different clothes and makeup may not be clear enough that time has passed.
- maybe think about using guildford as they're similar and not as far to go
- very ambitious, visually nice and great concept
- start scaling back on the idea and see how much of my idea stays in tact. How can I scale it down and what can I realistically do in one day?
- maybe following 2 lives instead of one? 1 friend to focus on and the other two appear.
- Consider how i'm going to condense it down to 3 minutes
- Like the idea of the time lapse of both elements framed the same cut back and forth between london and the woods
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